How you crop this photograph may depend on how the others in this series will be displayed. My method has always been to choose three pictures, return in a week or two and the answer then becomes obvious.
I'm glad you tried my suggestion! I'm not trying to nitpick, but since you've invited feedback: In my head I imagined a little less road at the bottom and a little more sky at the top -- putting the horizon on the 1/3 line rather than the 1/4 line. There's so much darkness at the bottom that it feels bottom-heavy to me.
the sky isn't as important to the story as the lines in the asphalt that show evidence of constant use. evidence of the many people moving their stuff in and out.
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How you crop this photograph may depend on how the others in this series will be displayed. My method has always been to choose three pictures, return in a week or two and the answer then becomes obvious.
I think this borders on being a bit too symmetrical. I prefer the third photo from the previous post.
oh, i like this!
I'm glad you tried my suggestion! I'm not trying to nitpick, but since you've invited feedback: In my head I imagined a little less road at the bottom and a little more sky at the top -- putting the horizon on the 1/3 line rather than the 1/4 line. There's so much darkness at the bottom that it feels bottom-heavy to me.
the sky isn't as important to the story as the lines in the asphalt that show evidence of constant use. evidence of the many people moving their stuff in and out.
The image should reflect the beholder's eye, of which you, the original beholder, have a pretty good one.
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